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Sep 7, 2023Liked by Mary Swander

Wow! Yes, I agree with Bonnie. Great telling. Brilliant last line. Love how you weave together the stories and earths of Ireland and Iowa.

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Sep 9, 2023Liked by Mary Swander

Archetypal Irish folk telling. Great piece.

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Sep 8, 2023Liked by Mary Swander

My family ancestors all lived in the small Island of Groix on the coast of Brittany. In the church archives I found their names down to 1590 for the earliest. Most of them were fishermen or sailors in trade or in the Navy. A lot disappeared in the ocean at a young age. My father was the first one to take a "land" job in construction. I always feel that the land, the sand and the granite are a part of me. Your story reminded me of that part of my life away from Iowa. Thank you for writing it.

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Sep 8, 2023Liked by Mary Swander

I have Irish/Iowa roots as well, Mary. I have visited the County Cork in Ireland looking for the Murphy’s and in Armagh in Northern Ireland I looked for the Berry’s (who are Barry’s there). I admire your determination to find your family roots. I can’t wait to read about your visit with your cousin, the gravedigger.

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Sep 7, 2023Liked by Mary Swander

I love that you got to find your ancestors. Idove to do the same.

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Great telling, Mary.

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Just “swell,” this account and point of view. Thanks.

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Hi, Mary. This is a comment for "You Didn't Keep Score?" though I seem to be at the St Brendan's comment site, which I also loved. "You Didn't Keep Score" is beautiful and moving, touched me to tears. Thank you!

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